Thursday, October 2, 2008

"Most Dangerous Game" Paragraph

Here is a sample paragraph.  You can refer to your rubric for more information about how to write this paragraph and how you will be graded.

Your answer to the question you choose is your STANCE on the issue. Your answer should be your green topic sentence. Your REASONS for why you chose that answer or stance are your yellow sentences. Your EVIDENCE from the text are your red sentences. Remember: Your paragraph should be at least 10 sentences long.

EXAMPLE:
In "The Most Dangerous Game," the character of Rainsford clearly values liberty over equality.
In the beginning of the story, Rainsford proves himself to be a wealthy hunter who cares little for others' feelings or opinions. When Whitney proposes that a hunted jaguar might feel fear, he responds, "Bah! They've no understanding!" He also calls the sailors' fears about Ship-trap Island "pure imagination." He hardly stops to think that other people might have opinions other than his own. At the end of the story, Rainsford is still single-mindedly focused on his own needs and desires. Even though he condemns murder, he kills both Ivan and Zaroff without a second thought. In fact, after two murders, he sleeps soundly: "He had never slept in a better bed." The ending almost suggests that Rainsford has taken over Zaroff's position as a hunter-of-men on the island. There is no evidence to suggest that he has had a change of heart about hunting or about his responsibility to others (such as the sailors still trapped on the island). Because Rainsford always pursues his own desires and never stops to consider others, it's clear that he cares more for liberty than equality.

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